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Paramour

  • Apr. 10th, 2009 at 3:14 AM
sepia Toma

by Salome

(Alternate Universe)

 

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12

Part 13

 

And so it was agreed that Toma would leave with his father as soon as possible.  Yamapi would follow them to Paris after a few weeks.  He needed time to arrange for his travel and university documents.  However, he did not arrive in Paris at the expected time.  When Toma called him, an unfamiliar voice answered his phone.

 

“Toma-kun…  It’s good to finally hear from you.”

 

Toma’s pulse pounded in his skull and he barely managed to say, “Who is this?”  But he knew even before he heard the answer.

 

“This is Johnny Kitagawa.  I hope you remember me…”

 

“I remember you,” Toma said weakly.  “You killed my mother.”

 

“You killed mine first,” came the cold response.  “And I will also kill your lover if you are not back in Tokyo in two days.”

 

 

Yamapi’s beautiful countenance was sufficiently beaten to a pulp when Toma next saw him.  Kitagawa had ten of his armed mercenaries with him.  He immediately made it clear that he had no intention of releasing Yamapi alive by shooting him in the chest.

 

Toma rushed at him in full speed when he saw that Kitagawa intends to fire a second shot to Yamapi’s head.  Everything happened so fast that Kitagawa and his men didn’t know what hit them.  MatsuJun, Shun, Kame and 15 others have finished off the mercenaries even before Toma collided with Kitagawa.  Kitagawa had become richer over the years, but unfortunately for him, he didn’t get any smarter.  He was not aware that although vampires are territorial creatures, they fight faithfully with their coven when one of their kind is in danger.  Because he and his men have modern guns, Kitagawa had totally underestimated the coven’s deadly skills, honed through centuries of fighting for their existence.

 

Kitagawa’s last memory was of the glint of Toma’s favorite weapon, the steel sword.  Toma swung it in one fluid motion and Kitagawa’s head fell to the ground with an ugly crunch, its eyes staring wide and empty, its mouth frozen in muted scream.

 

 

EPILOGUE

 

He walked carefully to the bed, his wet feet leaving prints on the floor.  He drank the sight of his sleeping lover’s pale naked body.  Toma was lying on his side so he had to climb the bed to see his face.  Toma frowned when droplets of water from Yamapi’s wet hair fell on his face.

 

“You’re dripping all over me,” Toma complained.

 

Yamapi laughed and kissed his neck, his hand sliding down from Toma’s stomach to that place between his legs.  Toma yelped when touched by Yamapi’s cold hand, but he uncurled and turned on his back.  Yamapi straddled him and bent forward to kiss him on the mouth.

 

“Hmm…  Salty,” Toma mumbled.

 

“Been surfing.”

 

“What time is it?”

 

“It’s 10:30am.  It’s about time you get up, Lazy.”

 

Toma opened his eyes and they stare at each other as Yamapi started moving his hips, enticing Toma into arousal.  He smiled mischievously when he felt the effect he desired.  Slowly but deliberately, Yamapi lowered himself over Toma’s erection, taking his breath away.  Yamapi bent forward to kiss him again and heard Toma sigh when their lips parted.

 

“Are you going to wake me up this way every day?” Toma smiled up at Yamapi.

 

“Hmmm…  I’m sure I can think of many ways to get you up in the morning,” he replied smugly.

 

 

End


Comments

( 28 comments — Leave a comment )
[info]ryaelle wrote:
Apr. 10th, 2009 02:37 pm (UTC)
♥__♥

I love this fic!!! Absolute LOVE~! Vampire!Toma just had my heart racing and possessive!jealous!Pi had me grinning all the time. The way you wrote had the entire story flashing behind my eyes and... wow~

The dark tinge to the whole story was awesome and I really, really, really wuv in a LOT~

I would have commented before but I just couldn't stop reading ♥

Please do write more!!!!!
[info]salome620 wrote:
Apr. 10th, 2009 03:57 pm (UTC)
thank you for reading! i appreciate your feedback.

take care!
[info]oroja wrote:
Apr. 11th, 2009 12:27 pm (UTC)
I like this so much. It's just great.

I can't wait for your next fic :)
[info]salome620 wrote:
Apr. 12th, 2009 05:50 am (UTC)
hello! i love your name; sounds exotic.
thank you so much for reading!
[info]edmantra wrote:
Apr. 13th, 2009 12:19 am (UTC)
Sugoi
*shudders at Kitagawa's beheaded scene*

Ah but I can imagine YamaPi returning from surfing. I swear if Toma is the sun then Pi is the beach. :)

And it's over. :( But A job well done! This was such a great, sensual read. Oh and Jun being the father took me by surprise although you'd drop hints along the way. Then, that kiss in part 6(?) was uh... incest? XD Haha. Vampire fiction always breaks contemporary boundaries.

“Are you going to wake me up this way every day?” Toma smiled up at Yamapi.

“Hmmm… I’m sure I can think of many ways to get you up in the morning,” he replied smugly.


Mmm. Lovely ending. And yes, of course Yamapi will know how to take good care of his little vampire. I loved this entire fic. Do write again and let me know so I can come down to read. ^_________^
[info]salome620 wrote:
Apr. 13th, 2009 05:06 am (UTC)
Re: Sugoi
if Toma is the sun then Pi is the beach. - i always associate Toma with the sun too.

that kiss in part 6(?) was uh... incest? - they're not really blood related, remember?

Vampire fiction always breaks contemporary boundaries. - i love it when i can work without boundaries.

thank you for reading up to the end. i totally enjoyed our conversations. take care!
[info]camaronzin wrote:
Apr. 16th, 2009 01:00 am (UTC)

You did decided to post it on LJ... i just love it TOO much... of course is going to memories...

And es i'm camaro_chan from Tomalicious... sorry for the delayed comment... i had ... technic problems XD
[info]salome620 wrote:
Apr. 16th, 2009 10:22 am (UTC)
hello! i'm so glad to hear from you. i'm glad that you liked this.
take care!
[info]xx_aizama_xx wrote:
Apr. 24th, 2009 05:33 pm (UTC)
am i too late to comment? _ _!

this is so great!!!
i love it~...
really222 love it...
i can so picture this... ^_^

all characters elaborated perfectly... A++ fic... XD
[info]salome620 wrote:
Apr. 25th, 2009 09:51 am (UTC)
no, not too late to comment. i'm so happy to hear from you. i'm glad you liked the story.
[info]c0rin wrote:
May. 2nd, 2009 10:45 am (UTC)
I actually waited for this to be finished before I read it. (Lol, despite my bad habit of leaving everyone hanging, I hate it when it's done to me. *is obviously a hypocrite*) peace!

This fic, it

SPARKLES!!

I really love your writing style. So...I don't know, easy to picture? It's like a movie in my head.

My first TomaPi fic was actually Twilight inspired one, it never got finished (because it never made sense) but Pi was the vampire, after reading this, I think Toma might have made a better one. He's so...Sunshiny but dark? I don't know, maybe I just love the contradictions in his personality.

I hope you write more AU Tomapi.

: )

[info]salome620 wrote:
May. 2nd, 2009 02:27 pm (UTC)
wow, your kind words make my heart soar. i've known you from the Toma forum/communities & to know that you liked this story makes writing it worth all the trouble.

thank you so much for dropping by.
[info]c0rin wrote:
May. 3rd, 2009 03:12 am (UTC)
Lol, that's probably another person. I keep getting that but I don't remember being part of any Toma forums. Just Tomapi love.
[info]salome620 wrote:
May. 3rd, 2009 12:09 pm (UTC)
oops, sorry. i thought i saw you in Tomalicious.
anyways, i see you in Princess Rei's blog and i love reading your banters.
[info]c0rin wrote:
May. 4th, 2009 06:23 am (UTC)
Lol. Everyone makes the same mistake, i'm still looking for the other c0rin up till now.

Banter. Geh. Lol.
[info]salome620 wrote:
May. 4th, 2009 11:14 am (UTC)
i don't think there's any other c0rin. i just have a poor memory so i got mixed up. sorry again.

i want to invite you to read my latest fic (Storms in His Eyes), posted last weekend at Toma@LJ & Tomalicious. it's a one-shot so...
[info]im_amot wrote:
Sep. 17th, 2009 05:48 am (UTC)
eehhhh, finish already !!!

i thought u want to make this fiction 20 chapter or something although i am not so patient to know the end of this story .. LOL

and the ending is so nice ..

“Are you going to wake me up this way every day?” Toma smiled up at Yamapi.

"Hmmm… I’m sure I can think of many ways to get you up in the morning,” he replied smugly.


ohhh why i feel so happy to read this sentence .. horny me .. blurrr... i think u can continue for anotehr chapter for this story .. hehe XD



[info]salome620 wrote:
Sep. 17th, 2009 11:02 am (UTC)
actually, i didn't plan for this fic to be this long. i have always written short stories & is not used to writing long ones. this story really tortured me to the end. after completing it, i promised myself i'll never write another long one. but, who am i kidding? when a story needs to be told, it must be told.
[info]drmsr wrote:
Oct. 14th, 2009 03:26 am (UTC)
I seriously have to say this has been one of my all time favorite Tomapi fics the hotness and the drama were just ♥ and totally love Jun and Shun in this fic actually I love anything with hints of shuntoma xD I totally need to read more of your fics lol
[info]salome620 wrote:
Oct. 14th, 2009 04:42 am (UTC)

well, hello! haven't heard from you for sometime... your comments really came as a surprise because this story has been written months ago. i'm glad you liked it. thank you for your wonderful feedbacks. warms my heart.
[info]ryopants wrote:
Nov. 22nd, 2009 03:06 pm (UTC)
Yay! I like this! :Db
[info]salome620 wrote:
Nov. 23rd, 2009 11:30 am (UTC)

i'm glad you liked it. thank you for visiting.
[info]ryopants wrote:
Nov. 23rd, 2009 02:32 pm (UTC)
I've read all your work! <3 Wry you stopped writing? ):
[info]salome620 wrote:
Nov. 24th, 2009 12:38 pm (UTC)

hmm, just got lazy. and i think i ran out of things to write about. i hope you enjoyed reading the other stories.
[info]kate_firefly wrote:
Apr. 26th, 2010 08:21 pm (UTC)

finished! yey~
the ending is a lot shorter than i expected! but still awesome.

and toma finally gets revenge for his mom.... but u scared me when yamapi got shot in the chest!! but i guess toma's blood can heal him.

i love the epilogue. ~_~
very sexy that yamapi just came back f/the beach and he's wet and toma's naked on the bed...

'Toma opened his eyes and they stare at each other as Yamapi started moving his hips, enticing Toma into arousal. He smiled mischievously when he felt the effect he desired.'
goodness....HOT!! and i think this is the first time (in this story) yamapi is on top and actually seducing toma. nice....

ah, i only have 2 more of your fanfics i haven't read...it feels a little sad. =/

p.s.
i felt inspired by your fanfics and i can't seem to be away from my own fantasy world and toma for too long, so i have started writing my next fanfic already!! lol. i'm writing just a tiny bit each day and i'm keeping it simple and short this time, so it's been fun and exciting so far. ~_~ it's gonna be kinda like a one-shot, but maybe in 2 parts...i hope it can include a hot~ bed scene, but i'm not sure. lol...

[info]kate_firefly wrote:
Apr. 26th, 2010 08:30 pm (UTC)
this is really INSANE, but since i have trouble writing the hot~ parts for my fanfic....it's crossed my mind that in the future, if it does get to the point where i want us to consummate the relationship...i'd ask you to write that part for me.

LOL.

i know i'm crazy....
ok, see ya. xD

and take care!
[info]salome620 wrote:
Apr. 28th, 2010 02:06 pm (UTC)

ah, i only have 2 more of your fanfics i haven't read...it feels a little sad. - how come?

i felt inspired by your fanfics and i can't seem to be away from my own fantasy world and toma for too long, so i have started writing my next fanfic already!! - i'm glad to cause you to write a lot.  i know that writing makes you happy and that makes my writing worth it.

thank you for being a friend.
[info]kate_firefly wrote:
Apr. 28th, 2010 06:58 pm (UTC)

because after i read those 2, i don't know how long it'll be until u wrote more...i'll miss reading your fanfics. =(

thanks~ ^^ i do love writing.

thank you for listening to me ramble on about certain things and i love chatting with u about yr fanfics. you're a good friend! ~_~
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